Dreams, floaters, peripheral visions, third eye sightings, almost theres, ghosts, cherished illusions, flotsam, table scraps and little dancing particles
7/01/2010
Honolulu 1965
the pink hotel was still the queen
the hills looked like a christmas tree
the palms shimmered and the sticky scent of
plumeria lingered on the breeze
the new englander danced
barefoot on the sands and streets
the merchants offered cups of noodles
pineapple slices, leis and garish shirts
next to the club where don ho
slack key and hulu was king
mai tais and teriyaki
tropical dreams
and in the back streets
people who had came from everywhere
lit the bundles of firecrackers
tied to every pole
noise and smoke
for her-initiation
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17 comments:
Oh, I can feel the energy and the excitement on that street! I can smell the plumeria, I can feel the sand beneath my feet. Nice Magpie.
nice job! I rather enjoyed reading it! :) lisa
oh great stuff...you painted quite the scene there...i could see it all...
Don Ho! What a blast! Happy 4th 2010.
This is wonderful... it just feel good to read it, images come to life. Beautiful, inspired Magpie!
Wow, really wonderful! I could feel the excitement, the release from inhibitions. Your voice is really strong in this piece. Is this scene from personal experience? Great Magpie!
Wonderful imagery, Joan. You carried me there. I can even smell the smoke!
what a scene! nice magpie!
A beautiful Hotel indeed - My husband and I were married near there by Diamond Head....great Magpie...bkm
Thanks all magies.. yes I was there as a young woman from Massachusetts.. new world for me.. it was all wild and wooly then, few high rises.. unspoiled beaches. We lived on North Shore.Except for the VN war it could have been paradise. JT
magpies.. sorry
loved this as I could smell the plumeria and the smoke-nice Magpie!
Love you imagery! I, too, could smell the Plumeria and smoke. I have recently been to Hawaii and although it's changed some, your depiction is right on.
What a celebration!
Great magpie! I feel like I'm there...
I love Honolulu and your wonderful descriptions plunged me back into that scene of long ago. "Tiny
Bubbles" - oh, how I miss Don Ho!
Really nice. You captured the excitement of a first visit to Hawaii.
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