7/01/2010

Honolulu 1965


the pink hotel was still the queen
the hills looked like a christmas tree
the palms shimmered and the sticky scent of
plumeria lingered on the breeze

the new englander danced
barefoot on the sands and streets

the merchants offered cups of noodles
pineapple slices, leis and garish shirts
next to the club where don ho
slack key and hulu was king

mai tais and teriyaki
tropical dreams

and in the back streets
people who had came from everywhere
lit the bundles of firecrackers
tied to every pole

noise and smoke
for her-initiation

17 comments:

Helen said...

Oh, I can feel the energy and the excitement on that street! I can smell the plumeria, I can feel the sand beneath my feet. Nice Magpie.

Lisa said...

nice job! I rather enjoyed reading it! :) lisa

Brian Miller said...

oh great stuff...you painted quite the scene there...i could see it all...

Stafford Ray said...

Don Ho! What a blast! Happy 4th 2010.

brenda w said...

This is wonderful... it just feel good to read it, images come to life. Beautiful, inspired Magpie!

Patience said...

Wow, really wonderful! I could feel the excitement, the release from inhibitions. Your voice is really strong in this piece. Is this scene from personal experience? Great Magpie!

willow said...

Wonderful imagery, Joan. You carried me there. I can even smell the smoke!

soundoffreedom said...

what a scene! nice magpie!

signed...bkm said...

A beautiful Hotel indeed - My husband and I were married near there by Diamond Head....great Magpie...bkm

Joan Tucker said...

Thanks all magies.. yes I was there as a young woman from Massachusetts.. new world for me.. it was all wild and wooly then, few high rises.. unspoiled beaches. We lived on North Shore.Except for the VN war it could have been paradise. JT

Joan Tucker said...

magpies.. sorry

kathew said...

loved this as I could smell the plumeria and the smoke-nice Magpie!

C Hummel Kornell a/k/a C Hummel Wilson said...

Love you imagery! I, too, could smell the Plumeria and smoke. I have recently been to Hawaii and although it's changed some, your depiction is right on.

Tumblewords: said...

What a celebration!

Terresa said...

Great magpie! I feel like I'm there...

RNSANE said...

I love Honolulu and your wonderful descriptions plunged me back into that scene of long ago. "Tiny
Bubbles" - oh, how I miss Don Ho!

PattiKen said...

Really nice. You captured the excitement of a first visit to Hawaii.